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Re: That Day
She takes a sip from her coffee, her sight cloudy from fatigue. It had been a year today, since the accident. Or was it today? What did it matter, what ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Words from my heart
I like it. It's very simple, and yet elegant. But most of all, it's VULNERABLE. The poem feels intimate and "real," and I feel as if I've been given a ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: The Fair Goes By
You pulled me in from the moment I read the title. And the poem more than lives up to the expectations I had when I saw the title. The words ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: When I Was Young
Yes, this poem is very disturbing, but mostly because it's real, whether it's how children can be cruel or how this cruelty grows up along with children. I was moved ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Love is my season
A year with you, a sigh from the ocean I don't know Sapphire, it sounds to me a lot like a wave crashing in, and pulling out. I think you ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Love is my season
I’ve never seen the summer plant, as much hope as you can sow. I think the comma here is a hindrance to the meaning. Without the comma, plant is more ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Love is my season
All I can say is ...wow. Beautiful, exquisitely beautiful.
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite Least Favorite Color!?
Ochre. It looks like faded and decayed vomit. Disgusting.
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Shadow
If you ask me what is wrong I won't know what to say If you ask what I want, I will still meet you with silence. Not completely present, Not ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: White Raven, beginning portion
Hey, I really like the idea. This is a really good pioneering of the world of your story. I want to hear more about the raven without the power (what ...
Jul 12, 2008
